Tuesday, September 17, 2019

Due Monday, September 23rd - Petrarch's Sonnets

Overview:  The sonnet, as a poetic genre, began in Italy in the thirteenth century, and, under the later influence of the Italian poet Petrarch, became internationally popular. Petrarch established the basic form of the so-called Petrarchan sonnet Also called Italian sonnet: 14 lines divided into two clear parts, an opening octet (8 lines) and a closing sestet (6 lines) with a fixed rhyme scheme (abbaabba cdecde). Often the octet will pose a problem or paradox which the sestet will resolve. Petrarch also established the convention of the sonnet sequence as a series of love poems written by an adoring lover to an unattainable and unapproachable lady of unsurpassed beauty. The Petrarchan sonnet convention, in other words, established, not merely the form of the poem, but also the subject matter.  I posted "Sonnet 292" below for today's lesson.  Enjoy.

Directions:  Please choose a sonnet by Petrarch (see link below).  Cut and paste it into your post, and analyze it using the terminology we learned in class (see "The Poetry Cheet Sheet" below).  Most importantly, include a detailed personal analysis of the poem in your post.



Today's Lesson:  "Sonnet 292" from the Canzoniere
translated by Anthony Mortimer 

The eyes I spoke of once in words that burn,
the arms and hands and feet and lovely face
that took me from myself for such a space
of time and marked me out from other men;
the waving hair of unmixed gold that shone,
the smile that flashed with the angelic rays
that used to make this earth a paradise,
are now a little dust, all feeling gone;
and yet I live, grief and disdain to me,
left where the light I cherished never shows,
in fragile bark on the tempestuous sea.
Here let my loving song come to a close;
the vein of my accustomed art is dry,
and this, my lyre, turned at last to tears.


The eyes I spoke of with such warmth,
The arms and hands and feet and face
Which took me away from myself
And marked me out from other people;
The waving hair of pure shining gold,
And the flash of her angelic smile,
Which used to make a paradise on earth,
Are a little dust, that feels nothing.
And yet I live, for which I grieve and despise myself,
Left without the light I loved so much,
In a great storm on an unprotected raft.
Here let there be an end to my loving song:
The vein of my accustomed invention has run dry,
And my lyre is turned to tears.


Gli occhi di ch'io parlai sì caldamente,
et le braccia et le mani e i piedi e 'l viso,
che m'avean sì­ da me stesso diviso,
et fatto singular da l'altra gente;
le crespe chiome d'òr puro lucente
'l lampeggiar de l'angelico riso,
che solean fare in terra un paradiso,
poca polvere son, che nulla sente.
Et io pur vivo, onde mi doglio e sdegno,
rimaso senza 'l lume ch'amai tanto,
in gran fortuna e 'n disarmato legno.
Or sia qui fine al mio amoroso canto:
secca è la vena de l'usato ingegno,
et la cetera mia rivolta in pianto.



The Poetry Cheat Sheet 
Tone: This is the attitude of the speaker of the poem. You always have to consider the tone of the speaker even if you’re not specifically asked to analyze it. Tone relates to many of elements below. It’s a “big-picture” or “umbrella” concept. (You should have a “bank” of words in mind: angry, happy, carefree, bitter, sympathetic, sad, nostalgic, ironic, satirical, etc.)

Repetition: Poets often rely on repetition. This can be words, phrases, sounds, images, ideas. If a poet repeats something, it takes on more meaning.

Diction: This refers to words. What words does the poet use? Does he repeat any specific words? What connotation do the words have (positive, negative)?

Syntax/Structure: Do the sentences within the poem or stanzas have a recognizable structure? Does the structure or pattern change at a specific moment?

Imagery (sensory details): This refers to the images of the poem, especially those that appeal to many senses (sight, sound, taste, touch, smell).

Sounds: Sound is often conveyed in poetry. Look for rhyme and repetition, and things such as alliteration, consonance, and assonance (which are repetitions of specific types of sound).

Metaphors/Similes: Comparisons are often used to support imagery, but they can also be used to anchor a poem, to convey a poem’s main message. Any time a poet compares something to something else, you should take note of it.

Irony: This is HUGE in poetry. If something is said or happens that is unexpected, it’s ironic. If it’s sarcastic or satirical, it’s ironic. If you can recognize irony, you’re golden.

Allusion: This is a literary or historical reference. It is not as common on the AP exam, but you should know what it is and how it works.

Rhythm/Rhyme: This is covered with other elements above. This just refers to the recognizable pattern of a poem that gives it a sense of rhythm and flow.

Also:  Sestet (six line stanza), Octet (eight line stanza), Quatrain (four line stanza), couplet (two line stanza)

23 comments:

  1. Evan Meltsakos

    Greed and sleep and slothful beds

    have banished every virtue from the world,

    so that, overcome by habit,

    our nature has almost lost its way.

    And all the benign lights of heaven,

    that inform human life, are so spent,

    that he who wishes to bring down a stream

    from Helicon is pointed out as a wonder.

    Such desire for laurel, and for myrtle?

    ‘Poor and naked goes philosophy’,

    say the crowd intent on base profit.

    You’ll have poor company on that other road:

    So much the more I beg you, gentle spirit,

    not to turn from your great undertaking.

    Negative aspects of people such as greed as taken over the nature of society and how things used to be. Those who still unselfish and help and care about others are wonders. How can this mentality be? People act in this way. In the end you wont have anything with this mindset and it is critical you do not change if you are not greedy. The tone is very negative and emphasizes how terrible being greedy is in society. The rhythm stays consistent which keeps it all together and in my opinion sensible to read.

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  2. To make a graceful act of revenge,
    and punish a thousand wrongs in a single day,
    Love secretly took up his bow again,
    like a man who waits the time and place to strike.

    My power was constricted in my heart,
    making defence there, and in my eyes,
    when the mortal blow descended there,
    where all other arrows had been blunted.

    So, confused by the first assault,
    it had no opportunity or strength
    to take up arms when they were needed,

    or withdraw me shrewdly to the high,
    steep hill, out of the torment,
    from which it wishes to save me now but cannot.
    This poem is telling the reader “To make a graceful act of vengeance and abuse the thousands wrongs in a single day. Regain your respect and love for the person you are trying to get back at, like a man who waits for the time and place to strike. My power was limited by my heart, making the argument with my eyes, then when the soul blow plummeted to where all the arrows had been undermind. Being confused by the first assault, it had no event or meaning to take up arms where they were needed.” the overall mood is ironic, it kinda seems like this person is going through a hard breakup with an Ex or a friend. There is an ongoing theme of love to hatred, and struggle of getting over this person.

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  3. 'Little wandering bird that goes singing

    your time gone by, with weeping notes,

    seeing the night and the winter near,

    and the day and all the joyful months behind,

    if, knowing your own heavy sorrows,

    you could know of my state like your own,

    you would fly to this disconsolate breast

    to share your grievous sadness with me.

    I cannot say our measures would be equal,

    since perhaps the one you cry for still has life,

    which in my case Death and heaven have denied:

    but the fading season and the hour,

    with the memory of sweet years and bitter,

    invite me to speak to you, of pity.'

    This poem has a sad tone as the speaker reveals that they lost a love to death. He likens himself to a little bird that has recently realized that it is becoming winter. The bird is sad that winter is coming because it remembers all the good times it had in the summer. These are examples of metaphor and repetition in the poem.

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  4. I have not seen you, lady,

    leave off your veil in sun or shadow,

    since you knew that great desire in myself

    that all other wishes in the heart desert me.

    While I held the lovely thoughts concealed,

    that make the mind desire death,

    I saw your face adorned with pity:

    but when Love made you wary of me,

    then blonde hair was veiled,

    and loving glances gathered to themselves.

    That which I most desired in you is taken from me:

    the veil so governs me

    that to my death, and by heat and cold,

    the sweet light of your lovely eyes is shadowed.

    This poem has a pretty gloomy tone to it. The speaker seems to be depressed that his girlfriend has left him. when the speaker discusses how he saw her "face adorned with pity", he is using imagery to convey a sense of lonesomeness or distress within the women with the speaker, possibly that she is unhappy with him or that he has no shot with her in a relationship.

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  5. Greed and sleep and slothful beds
    have banished every virtue from the world,
    so that, overcome by habit,
    our nature has almost lost its way.
    And all the benign lights of heaven,
    that inform human life, are so spent,
    that he who wishes to bring down a stream
    from Helicon is pointed out as a wonder.
    Such desire for laurel, and for myrtle?
    ‘Poor and naked goes philosophy’,
    say the crowd intent on base profit.
    You’ll have poor company on that other road:
    So much the more I beg you, gentle spirit,
    not to turn from your great undertaking.

    This poem has a negative tone because he talks about how greed has taken over our world in a big way and talks about how bad it is to be greedy. A metaphor he uses to describe how greed has taken a toll on society is “ Greed and sleep and slothful beds”. When he means “slothful beds” he means that people are being lazy and focus on themselves which causes greed and it changes a person's attitude in a big way.

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  6. To make a graceful act of revenge,
    And to punish a thousand wrong actions or behaviors in a day,
    Love showed itself again for the person I love,
    Waited for the time and place to it to flourish again,
    This love grew greatly in my heart,
    Holding its place their and letting it be shown in my eyes,
    When it is known who my love is for,
    And I have made it known to them,
    They are so confused by my actions,
    There was no opportunity or strength in what i did,
    The feeling of being left behind and forgotten about,
    And now they wish to save me,
    But I am too far gone.

    In this poem, it portrays a relationship that was torn apart by someone who was loved by the main character/poet. The theme of hatred towards this person fluctuates between hate and love throughout the poem. They seem to lose themselves more and more as the poem continues. By the end, they seem to be gone when the person that hurt the poet's heart seems to want to come back. In this poem I did not see any repetition, however, the use of the word love is presented numerous times throughout the poem. This is an indication to the readers how important the love that the author has or once had for the special person. The poem seems to shift after the second stanza, it seems as if the poet feels bad for their actions.
    - Adriana DeSantis

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  7. I have not seen you, lady,

    leave off your veil in sun or shadow,

    since you knew that great desire in myself

    that all other wishes in the heart desert me.

    While I held the lovely thoughts concealed,

    that make the mind desire death,

    I saw your face adorned with pity:

    but when Love made you wary of me,

    then blonde hair was veiled,

    and loving glances gathered to themselves.

    That which I most desired in you is taken from me:

    the veil so governs me

    that to my death, and by heat and cold,

    the sweet light of your lovely eyes is shadowed.

    The poem has a very sad tine to it. It seems as if the poet lost a significant other or the significant other left him. He uses alot of imagery to help sort of show you how he feels and his emotions. I think he really likes the girl he is talking about but deep down she doesn't like him back "While I held the lovely thoughts concealed,
    that make the mind desire death,
    I saw your face adorned with pity"
    Other than imagery he uses repetition with the word veil and brings up death also alot.

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    1. Just so you don't make this mistake on something that's really important in the future: a lot is two words, not one.

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  8. 292. ‘Gli occhi di ch’io parlai sí caldamente,’
    The eyes I spoke about so warmly,
    and the arms, the hands, the ankles, and the face
    that left me so divided from myself,
    and made me different from other men:
    the crisp hair of pure shining gold
    and the brightness of the angelic smile,
    which used to make a paradise on earth,
    are now a little dust, that feels no thing.
    And I still live, which I grieve over and disdain,
    left without the light I loved so much,
    in great ill-fortune, in a shattered boat.
    Now make an end of my loving songs:
    the vein of my accustomed wit is dry,
    and my lyre is turned again to weeping.

    This poem is clearly showing the love for a woman who is not with them anymore. There's sadness towards the end after the love he explained he had for her “The brightness of the angelic smile, which used to make a paradise on earth”. He speaks so highly of her and uses diction to talk like she is a prized possession you can see the imagery in this poem. You can feel comfort and shining light this woman had made him feel but now that she is gone he weeps.

    Paige B

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  9. When Love doth those sweet eyes to earth incline,
    And weaves those wandering notes into a sigh
    With his own touch, and leads a minstrelsy
    Clear-voiced and pure, angelic and divine,—
    He makes sweet havoc in this heart of mine,
    And to my thoughts brings transformation high,
    So that I say, “My time has come to die,
    If fate so blest a death for me design.”
    But to my soul, thus steeped in joy, the sound
    Brings such a wish to keep that present heaven,
    It holds my spirit back to earth as well.
    And thus I live: and thus is loosed and wound
    The thread of life which unto me was given
    By this sole Siren who with us doth dwell.

    This poem talks about love and life and how our spiritual world is connected to the real world. The poem has an ominous tone towards life and death and it seems to have a connection with ones soul.
    -Nolan Brezinski

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  10. ‘Era il giorno ch’al sol si scoloraro’
    It was on that day when the sun’s ray
    was darkened in pity for its Maker,
    that I was captured, and did not defend myself,
    because your lovely eyes had bound me, Lady.
    It did not seem to me to be a time to guard myself
    against Love’s blows: so I went on
    confident, unsuspecting; from that, my troubles
    started, amongst the public sorrows.
    Love discovered me all weaponless,
    and opened the way to the heart through the eyes,
    which are made the passageways and doors of tears:
    so that it seems to me it does him little honour
    to wound me with his arrow, in that state,
    he not showing his bow at all to you who are armed.
    This sonnet uses personification to bring alive the words and allude to the true meaning of the words, rather than what it is with just one look. The sonnet depicts a loss of innocence and the dark tone helps to give an uncomfortable feeling to the reader that really reads into it. I think the writer was possibly assaulted because they describe how, “I was captured, and did not defend myself” and “Love discovered me all weaponless”. Which shows the innocence of the writer, and because of how the other person is referred to as “Lady” it confirms the negativity in the relationship between them.

    Regan Grygiel

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  11. Zephyr returns and brings fair weather,
    and the flowers and herbs, his sweet family,
    and Procne singing and Philomela weeping,
    and the white springtime, and the vermilion.
    The meadows smile, and the skies grow clear:
    Jupiter is joyful gazing at his daughter:
    the air and earth and water are filled with love:
    every animal is reconciled to loving.
    But to me, alas, there return the heaviest
    sighs, that she draws from the deepest heart,
    who took the keys of it away to heaven:
    and the song of little birds, and the flowering fields,
    and the sweet, virtuous actions of women
    are a wasteland to me, of bitter and savage creatures.

    This poem speaks with a hopeful tone of fair weather and uses metaphors that portray a very happy time. However Petrarch creates a bit of a paradox in his last line of the sonnet by saying “virtuous actions of women are a wasteland to me” although the line is a bit confusing you can tell by his choice of words that he is changing the tone to harsh.
    -Sean Healey

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  12. The eyes I spoke of once in words that burn,
    the arms and hands and feet and lovely face
    that took me from myself for such a space
    of time and marked me out from other men;
    the waving hair of unmixed gold that shone,
    the smile that flashed with the angelic rays
    that used to make this earth a paradise,
    are now a little dust, all feeling gone;
    and yet I live, grief and disdain to me,
    left where the light I cherished never shows,
    in fragile bark on the tempestuous sea.
    Here let my loving song come to a close;
    the vein of my accustomed art is dry,
    and this, my lyre, turned at last to tears.

    This poem shows the feelings a men goes through after a very hard breakup with a women he loved very much. In the beginning of the sonnet he calls her "angelic" and that she made his life "paradise on Earth" but now that she's gone he says that he is still alive but it still hurts and that he is still crying.

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  13. I have offered you my heart a thousand times
    O my sweet warrior, only to make peace
    with your lovely eyes: but it does not please you
    with your noble mind, to stoop so low.
    And if some other lady has hope of it,
    she lives in powerless, deceiving hope:
    and it can never be what it was to me,
    since I too disdain what does not please you.
    Now if I banish it, and it does not find in you
    any aid in its unhappy exile, nor knows
    how to be alone, nor to go where others call it,
    it might stray from its natural course:
    which would be a grave crime for both of us,
    and more for you, since it loves you more.

    The speaker is upset over the others distance from them. You can tell that the speaker is heartbroken over them. Throughout this poem there are many metaphors and tons of imagery.

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  14. ‘Per fare una leggiadra sua vendetta’

    To make a graceful act of revenge,
    and punish a thousand wrongs in a single day,
    Love secretly took up his bow again,
    like a man who waits the time and place to strike.

    My power was constricted in my heart,
    making defence there, and in my eyes,
    when the mortal blow descended there,
    where all other arrows had been blunted.

    So, confused by the first assault,
    it had no opportunity or strength
    to take up arms when they were needed,

    or withdraw me shrewdly to the high,
    steep hill, out of the torment,
    from which it wishes to save me now but cannot.


    From what I can understand, it seems this poem is telling the story of a man who has withstood love though his love and has been able to protect himself from it and not be hurt by it. Though there seemed to come a time where his defences were down, and the arrow love was sharper than before, and so love punctured his heart.

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  15. I have not seen you, lady,

    leave off your veil in sun or shadow,

    since you knew that great desire in myself

    that all other wishes in the heart desert me.

    While I held the lovely thoughts concealed,

    that make the mind desire death,

    I saw your face adorned with pity:

    but when Love made you wary of me,

    then blonde hair was veiled,

    and loving glances gathered to themselves.

    That which I most desired in you is taken from me:

    the veil so governs me

    that to my death, and by heat and cold,

    the sweet light of your lovely eyes is shadowed.

    This poem has a very dark and depressing theme. The poet seems to be describing the loss of a relationship with a loved one. Although he does not directly state what the loss was, he uses imagery to show his emotions of sadness. The quote “That which I most desired in you is taken from me” explains how the speaker lost something he loved, it was taken away from him.
    -Natalie Brennen

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  16. ‘La gola e ’l sonno et l’otïose piume’

    Greed and sleep and slothful beds
    have banished every virtue from the world,
    so that, overcome by habit,
    our nature has almost lost its way.

    And all the benign lights of heaven,
    that inform human life, are so spent,
    that he who wishes to bring down a stream
    from Helicon is pointed out as a wonder.

    Such desire for laurel, and for myrtle?
    ‘Poor and naked goes philosophy’,
    say the crowd intent on base profit.

    You’ll have poor company on that other road:
    So much the more I beg you, gentle spirit,
    not to turn from your great undertaking.



    The sonnet tells about how humanity has lost its way in pursuit for luxury and greed while philosophy is forgotten. We've depleted the lights of heaven it says so much so that we've become numb to its effects. The poem give a very hopeless feeling.

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  17. Bitter tears pour down my face
    with an anguished storm of sighing,
    when my eyes chance to turn on you
    through whom alone I am lost from the world.
    Yet it is true that your soft gentle smile
    quietens my ardent desires,
    and saves me from the fire of suffering,
    while I am intent and fixed on gazing.
    But then my spirits are chilled, when I see,
    at your departure, my fatal stars
    turn their sweet aspect from me.
    Released at last by those loving keys,
    the spirit leaves the heart to follow you,
    and in deep thought, walks on from there.

    The tone I get off from this poem is sad, bitter, soft and breezy. The poem portrays a sad individual being brought into the light by another individual. The words used in this poem gives off a very blissful tone such as “soft” and “chilled”. “Bitter tears pour down my face,'' this line brings an image in my head of the tears pouring down someone's face because it is described so deeply. The person in this poem is deeply depressed but when their eyes turn onto a certain person things disappear and the suffering ends for just a moment. The spirit in the end follows the other at their departure because their heart is following itself.
    -Jussy Reppucci

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  18. To make a graceful act of revenge,
    And to punish a thousand wrong actions or behaviors in a day,
    Love showed itself again for the person I love,
    Waited for the time and place to it to flourish again,
    This love grew greatly in my heart,
    Holding its place their and letting it be shown in my eyes,
    When it is known who my love is for,
    And I have made it known to them,
    They are so confused by my actions,
    There was no opportunity or strength in what i did,
    The feeling of being left behind and forgotten about,
    And now they wish to save me,
    But I am too far gone.

    This sonnet portrays a a broken relationship where the speaker loved this person, but the person waited too late for them. He was distraught about falling out of love and therefore becomes very angry. Originally the speaker shows anger, but later that anger is explained. He finally moves on just as the the person mentioned fell for him. Love is the central theme as love makes him angry and sad; he needed a break from it. The speaker is very vague, “They are so confused by my actions, There was no opportunity or strength in what i did,”. All we end up knowing, is that he regrets his revenge and wishes he could go back to the ways things were; but it is too late for them.
    - Michael Long

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  19. Life flies, and never stays an hour,
    and death comes on behind with its dark day,
    and present things and past things
    embattle me, and future things as well:
    and remembrance and expectation grip my heart,
    now on this side, now on that, so that in truth,
    if I did not take pity on myself,
    I would have freed myself already from all thought.
    A sweetness that the sad heart knew
    returns to me: yet from another quarter
    I see the storm-winds rattling my sails:
    I see no chance of harbour, and my helmsman
    is weary now, and my masts and ropes are broken,
    and the beautiful stars, I used to gaze on, quenched.

    In this poem, you get a sense of regret and grievance. I know this because he says “Life flies and never stays an hour” which means life is too short for me to be grieving”. However, he continues to wish for the past or the good times in his past. He also gives the poem an eerie mode by speaking of suicide “if I did not take pity on myself, I would have freed myself already from all thought,” either that or he’s talking about how if he did not think of his misfortunes so much he wouldn’t be so depressed. Imagery has a big role in this poem as he talks about how he quenches to see beautiful stars and also how his sails/ environment feels at the time.

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  20. Blessed be the day, and the month, and the year,

    and the season, and the time, and the hour, and the moment,

    and the beautiful country, and the place where I was joined

    to the two beautiful eyes that have bound me:

    and blessed be the first sweet suffering

    that I felt in being conjoined with Love,

    and the bow, and the shafts with which I was pierced,

    and the wounds that run to the depths of my heart.

    Blessed be all those verses I scattered

    calling out the name of my lady,

    and the sighs, and the tears, and the passion:

    and blessed be all the sheets

    where I acquire fame, and my thoughts,

    that are only of her, that no one else has part of.

    The imagery in this poem really displays the author's emotions nicely. It is a very uplifting, and positive poem that was clearly written for someone the author is very fond of. He uses "beautiful" a lot throughout it, and that just shows you how he is feeling as he wrote this. The rhyme is obviously not there, because originally it was in a different language. The mood of the poem seems as if he wants someone to hear this to know how much they mean to him. Almost desperate, but also informative. The language in this poem is very rich and I understand completely what he was trying to do with this poem
    -adam theeb

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  21. jacob mini

    I have not seen you, lady,

    leave off your veil in sun or shadow,

    since you knew that great desire in myself

    that all other wishes in the heart desert me.

    While I held the lovely thoughts concealed,

    that make the mind desire death,

    I saw your face adorned with pity:

    but when Love made you wary of me,

    then blonde hair was veiled,

    and loving glances gathered to themselves.

    That which I most desired in you is taken from me:

    the veil so governs me

    that to my death, and by heat and cold,

    the sweet light of your lovely eyes is shadowed.

    this sonnet is meaningful,I can feel his feeling of affection towards this lady. hes holding something back for some reason, and im not sure why. It seems like he has lost a loved one and now he is in grief, expressing his emotions. "That which I most desired in you is taken from me-the veil so governs me-that to my death, and by heat and cold,-the sweet light of your lovely eyes is shadowed."
    these few lines express his emotion alot in my opinion. Im not seeing much use of figurative language either just more trying to get the point across here.

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